Ulysese’s Reviews > Strong Poison > Status Update
Ulysese
is 80% done
DLS strays from the ongoing investigation to point of no return. Everyone plot wise adds their own unrelated commentary which drastically slows the pace. These unrelated comments serve no purpose other than writer showing displaying writing skill. Problem is the comments are he said she said which leaves the reader bewildered.
This is my third DLS novel and I fail to see how it's classified a masterpiece!
— Dec 16, 2024 12:53PM
This is my third DLS novel and I fail to see how it's classified a masterpiece!
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Ulysese
is 75% done
Author's familiarization with classic languages is sprinkled thoughout the book adding to the difficulty of comprehension. Add the English mannerism and I was totally lost on several occasions which required multiple backtracking of the story elements.
Characters are brought to life via conversation not related to the plot. A mechanism adds to the story's realism and portrayal of people in everyday life.
— Dec 15, 2024 08:44AM
Characters are brought to life via conversation not related to the plot. A mechanism adds to the story's realism and portrayal of people in everyday life.
