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Dru is on page 100 of 578
I'm 100 pages in and for pity's sake she repeats the same God damned cliffhanger over and over and over. No joke! FOUR times now we've seen character "Badri" say "something's wrong" at the end of a chapter. We revisit him OVER and OVER and the story does NOT progress. How can you be a professional author and not progress your story over four chapters?
May 11, 2016 11:17AM
Doomsday Book (Oxford Time Travel, #1)

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Dru is on page 100 of 578
Sigh...a female author writing about a young woman going alone back in time. Didn't I just SUFFER through this with that freaking "Outlander" atrocity?
May 11, 2016 11:17AM
Doomsday Book (Oxford Time Travel, #1)


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