Regina Long’s Reviews > Dance of the Shadow Walkers: A M/M Slow Burn Dark Fantasy > Status Update

I feel overloaded by the descriptions of the way people say things and what people are doing. There’s also something immature about the characterizations. I realize Nick is a teenager, so that makes sense in his character, but there is 1st pov in his father as well and the immaturity is consistent. I think this book could have used an editor to help with smoothing out the narrative and fixing characterization.