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“Hands ringing, Cateline blew out a nervous breath as she waited.”
HANDS RINGING??????? you’re kidding me. at this point i’m hate reading
— Dec 29, 2024 11:00PM
HANDS RINGING??????? you’re kidding me. at this point i’m hate reading
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“Time again, no matter what word she tried to come up with to describe him, it always landed on beautiful.”
this makes me nuts. what is the “it” in this sentence??? i feel like im reading one of my students’ papers. idk maybe im being too harsh but this book is full of lil things like this
— Dec 29, 2024 08:09PM
this makes me nuts. what is the “it” in this sentence??? i feel like im reading one of my students’ papers. idk maybe im being too harsh but this book is full of lil things like this
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god the writing/grammar in this is so clunky and bad but i’m holding out for lesbians
— Dec 28, 2024 10:49PM
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Dec 29, 2024 11:25PM
Does it mean like ringing her hands? Or was this supposed to be like ears ringing?
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I guess that would be wringing, so either way lol
yeah it’s supposed to be wringing 😩 it would be fine as an isolated mistake but this book appears to have not been proofread or edited at all, i am going insane
Lol well just don't take a shot every time - or maybe do? 😅
