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Sam Spillman
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i keep pausing throughout this book because as soon as i become somewhat immersed in a scene – a sentence, something a character said, a reaction, etc. that feels out of place just rips me back out and I have to trudge through it.
Bellamy and Koraine need to have a more in depth argument. I need to see some angry quips back and forth between them.
— Dec 30, 2024 11:08AM
Bellamy and Koraine need to have a more in depth argument. I need to see some angry quips back and forth between them.
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Sam Spillman
is on page 199 of 306
youre telling me? that her drowning basically in the ocean and Bellamy like saving her?? that she didn't like gag out the water? she wasn't breathing and he's like "yeah go sit on my dragon Imry" she wakes up after he burned everyone like "...B....Bellamy?" WITH A LITTLE BIT of water dribbling out?? WRONG theres no way
— Dec 30, 2024 03:14PM
Sam Spillman
is on page 105 of 306
okay i get that we needed character growth but there really was nothing for them to grow off of bestieeeeeeeesssss this is chopppy. Also i know this is inspired by Zuko and Katara but its almost closely following Zuko's story. I wish there was a bit more diversity there
— Dec 30, 2024 02:14PM
