Isabelle’s Reviews > Atlas: The Story of Pa Salt > Status Update

I feel like the writing is off. Things that makes me question the characters, but then i realize the descriptions is just off and sets the wrong tone for were the story is going. And there is a constant skipping here and there to describe things but it is hard to keep the thread or feeling. But I guess its Rileys son writing so might be what Im seeing here, that I dont recognize nor like actually. Hopefully changes..