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Max Kimmelman
is on page 267 of 537
a little iffy on the writing style by now. recently been p frustrated by the descriptions of rock/sand formations since i never rly understand what they’re supposed to be as paul/jessica traverse the desert. this happens semi often w other settings too earlier in the book. altho the description of paul’s sense of seeing across time is p well done.
— Jan 02, 2025 09:10AM
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Max Kimmelman
is on page 59 of 537
loving the narrative style and how quickly it throws you into its wild universe in a pretty immersive way. however, a couple things feel a bit off. firstly paul is a bit too faultless and talented right off the bat. also, the third person narration that weaves in internal monologue of various characters is good at adding complexity to the narrative, but it still feels p stilted when it comes out of nowhere at times.
— Dec 17, 2024 11:07AM
