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Lauren
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"Dark leaves shiny as tongues" what are you talking about? Tongues are very specifically not shiny, they are highly textured and do not reflect light well
Jan 04, 2025 10:56AM
Threadneedle (The Language of Magic, #1)

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Lauren
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Uh oh. These metaphors don't make sense to me. "the melody [was] so fragile and heart-achingly beautiful it seemed to be made of silence itself." Uh, what? What are you trying to say?
Jan 02, 2025 10:28AM
Threadneedle (The Language of Magic, #1)


Lauren
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darn, didn't realize it was a series....
Jan 02, 2025 10:04AM
Threadneedle (The Language of Magic, #1)


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