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NO IM SAAAAAAT ITS LIKE HOOKED ME NOW

This scene is so poorly place and poorly done and fucking RANDOM THERES ACTUALLY NO RELEVANCE TO JUST WRITE THIS WHEN NO ONE HAS CHARACTER IN THIS STORY LIKE WTF ALEX ASTER YOURE ACTUALLY WRITING LIKE A 7TH GRADER WHO THINKS THEIR IN HONORS ENGLISH AND IS A GOOD WRITER BUT NEEDS 5+ MORE YEARS OF WRITING EXPERIENCE TO ACTUALLY BE A GOOD WRITER

It took m 346 pages in to start getting into this book and yet I still have so many questions and I’m annoyed and now I’m back to being confused LIKE I JUST NEED TO KNOW SO I CAN REST

I have nobody to talk to about this but I’m fucking DYSLEXIC !!! Also ok hear me out ok.. two MMC.. one blonde.. one brunette… LIKE U KNOOOOOOW WHATS SUPPOSED TO HAPPEN RIGHT ?? U KNOW IT IN YOUR BONES THAT ITS ALWAYS THE DARK SHADOWY EVIL ONES RIGHT ? SO WHY AM I CONFUSED ??????!!!!! THE BLONDES DONT WIN UNLESS UR JACKS WITH EVANGELINE

I feel so stupid because this is giving me dyslexia and isn’t this a YA book? Shouldn’t it be easy to follow?? Instead I have no idea wtf is happening and like what even is the plot like sorry but I’ll still read this