Jason’s Reviews > The Spirit Bares Its Teeth > Status Update

It’s starting to feel slightly rushed here :( you can really see the character writing struggles here, like why tf did Louise (I’m getting her confused to Charlotte a lot) stay behind?? How quickly does the Veil freeze things? How did headmaster and the doctor not notice them freezing? Did the spirits target them to freeze? God Andrew get your writing together

Actual nothingness PLEASE GIVE THE OTHER FOUR GIRLS PERSONALLITIIIIEEEEEEESSSSBUUUGGH

Love the trans women representation, but it’s getting quite tedious with its “hints” and its attempt at its subversive narrative. But trudge on I will!

Uuugggghhhhhhhhhhhh I’m honestly hate reading this book and turning it better in my head just as the authors earlier book.