Margaret’s Reviews > Wanting the Winger > Status Update

The pacing of the story is off, the characters have no personality, their dialog is lacking, the Greek pet names are overused and awful, their pov thoughts are even lacking, the conflict is a miscommunication/omitting identity with a horribly written resolution of banging it out two seconds later. The spicy scene I already suffered through was so clearly written by a man. I just cannot waste anymore time on this.