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Marie is going to be the reason I either stop reading this or start skimming pages.
— May 26, 2016 05:54AM
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"Earth" mentioned twice in one paragraph but I'm assuming the first time is in reference to ground/dirt, so no capital E needed. The second time...it's as if the author forgot that this is supposed to be a different planet.
— May 26, 2016 07:39PM
