David Walker’s Reviews > Rise Again: Below Zero > Status Update

Okay, I literally just started the book, and if I hadn’t just read book one and thoroughly enjoyed it, I would throw this freaking thing out the G-Damn window. Mr. Tripp, you should fire your editor and beta readers right now, because starting your novel with 4+ pages of broken English journaling is egregious. I don’t believe I’ve ever been more irritated by a book after reading only 5 pages.