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Michon
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Chapter 6- I feel like there are too many small details and not enough over arching ones…
There are things mentioned that the author didn’t cover. Also, I hate the little footnotes. They make me feel like I’m missing something when it’s sometimes just a funny joke 🙃
— Jan 07, 2025 06:31PM
There are things mentioned that the author didn’t cover. Also, I hate the little footnotes. They make me feel like I’m missing something when it’s sometimes just a funny joke 🙃
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There are some things I don’t particularly love about how the story is going.
1.) I think the single perspective is really confusing for the reader. I don’t feel like I have a clear picture on Angie and Ricky‘s relationship so far.
2.) The Asterix are really irritating because it’s breaking the reading stride when she could’ve put it in the novel instead of the footnotes.
— Jan 09, 2025 01:26PM
1.) I think the single perspective is really confusing for the reader. I don’t feel like I have a clear picture on Angie and Ricky‘s relationship so far.
2.) The Asterix are really irritating because it’s breaking the reading stride when she could’ve put it in the novel instead of the footnotes.