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“…
Don’t you want to believe it?
Don’t you want to lift my shirt and see
the huge beating genius machine
that thinks, no, it knows,
it’s going to come in first.”
Lots of good stuff but I really can’t get over the first piece (“how to triumph like a girl”). The humor?? The pacing??? If I had even a trace of the writing skills Limón exhibits here I’d consider myself a prodigy 🐎
— Jan 07, 2025 09:38PM
Don’t you want to believe it?
Don’t you want to lift my shirt and see
the huge beating genius machine
that thinks, no, it knows,
it’s going to come in first.”
Lots of good stuff but I really can’t get over the first piece (“how to triumph like a girl”). The humor?? The pacing??? If I had even a trace of the writing skills Limón exhibits here I’d consider myself a prodigy 🐎
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[charlotte]
is on page 53 of 105
“…
how much we want to be
the exonerated creature, to be turned loose
into our own wide open without a single
harness of sin to stop us”
really loving all the horse ones- i think they have a lot of personality. “the riveter” is another favorite
— Jan 12, 2025 10:24PM
how much we want to be
the exonerated creature, to be turned loose
into our own wide open without a single
harness of sin to stop us”
really loving all the horse ones- i think they have a lot of personality. “the riveter” is another favorite
