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is 10% done
DNF 10%
There were several issues that I feel like could have been fixed with beta reader, ARC, friends or family, etc. that were not. Some of the sentences felt very juvenile with only four letters. While I don't mind that, this one seemed to have a lot. It felt like I was reading "see spot drink water."
— Jan 08, 2025 06:34AM
There were several issues that I feel like could have been fixed with beta reader, ARC, friends or family, etc. that were not. Some of the sentences felt very juvenile with only four letters. While I don't mind that, this one seemed to have a lot. It felt like I was reading "see spot drink water."
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