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Jan 12, 2025 08:52AM
The Alchemist

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hallie
hallie is 68% done
I am not convinced of the “love” between Santiago and Fatima. Where did this come from? A single moment of eye contact and a brief exchange of words has them committed to each other forever? I also hate how underdeveloped she is as a character. Nothing is revealed about who she is as a person, except for her commitment to wait behind for Santiago and live only for him… right.
Jan 27, 2025 05:51AM
The Alchemist


hallie
hallie is 57% done
This is… just ok. I’m kind of reading it just to get through it at this point.
Jan 16, 2025 06:56AM
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