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Chloraphyllis
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Weird grammar choices make this unpleasant to read as well- like a scratchy sweater, but it’s words on my brain instead of fabric on skin.
— Jan 13, 2025 05:30PM
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Chloraphyllis
is on page 55 of 576
Dropped, I can’t do it anymore- MMC sounds like a 14 year old edge lord that desperately needs CBT. Dialogue between characters is weird and stilted. Internal monologues are repetitive.
— Jan 13, 2025 05:41PM
Chloraphyllis
is on page 54 of 576
Hard to believe the characters are supposed to be college aged- they come across as high school freshman, at best…
— Jan 13, 2025 05:38PM
Chloraphyllis
is on page 16 of 576
The whole “…the type of beauty that notorious serial killers use to lure their victims,” bit is real fucking strange- either the FMC and/or the author should consider more therapy.
Hopefully there are actually interesting aspects of this story…if making an FMC foolish and lame is the only way to set up the introduction of an MMC then they’re not going to be characters I’m able to get invested in.
— Jan 13, 2025 05:18PM
Hopefully there are actually interesting aspects of this story…if making an FMC foolish and lame is the only way to set up the introduction of an MMC then they’re not going to be characters I’m able to get invested in.
