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Virginia is 30% done
THERE'S SO MUCH REPETITION it's like no one edited this. The "heartfelt sighs" and "lip twitches" are driving me crazy. I don't know how this was published and no one thought "oh, we should stop repeating the same thing over and over in every dialogue." I've read all the books in this series but I honestly don't remember if the writing was this bad. I'll keep reading just because I'm invested in the characters.
Jan 13, 2025 08:38PM
Short, Lethal and Claimed (Pyte/Sentinel, #8)

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