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The plots pretty interesting, but I feel like there's too much information all at once packed into paragraphs. It's difficult to comprehend some of the world building when it's all thrown at you like that. There's also a lot of swearing, it kinda throws me out of the universe just because it feels unnecessary a lot of the time.
— Jan 14, 2025 07:37PM
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