Brynette Turner’s Reviews > Alpha's Runaway Mate > Status Update
Brynette Turner
is 6% done
I hate sloppy writers!! The MMC says, "I'd known my mate since the day Lyra's father brought her to the sparring ground. She was just a fiftee-year-old ..." The very next paragraph starts with "I had known my mate my whole life ..." Then, the MMC's references to a "trunk" didn't make sense. The word misspelled 6 times was supposed to be TRUCK. And this is just the 2nd chapter. DNF at page 14.
— Jan 15, 2025 12:31AM
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