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"The illusions of her youth had been removed with no anesthesia. She hadn’t expected to survive the experience. But she had. And now she was completely invulnerable."
The idea is good, but it gets boring. Someone should tell the author about the ' show, don't tell ' rule. I couldn't finish it.
— Jan 17, 2025 05:00AM
The idea is good, but it gets boring. Someone should tell the author about the ' show, don't tell ' rule. I couldn't finish it.
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