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Helsic 伊明海
is 30% done
last update: Wait wait... Jaypaw is still thinking about having Sol as mentor? What the fuck? Seriously that makes absolutely no sense at all! In the previous book they were all angry at Sol for staying in the Shadow Clan and they said they didn't trust him anymore. This book is kind of contradicting the previous one.
— Jun 05, 2016 06:50PM
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Helsic 伊明海
is 89% done
I made a mistake I'm actually about to finish the book not in page 86.
— Jun 12, 2016 12:24AM
Helsic 伊明海
is on page 89 of 316
I can't get over the fact that Millie is sick when she said she got vaccinated by a vet in previous books. I mean I don't mind some misspelling mistake in a name but THIS IS MAJOR PLOT CHANGING MISTAKE! the whole book have been about Millie being sick and the drama with Graystripe and the kits... I can't believe the authors didn't pay attention to this MAJOR detail before publishing the book!
— Jun 12, 2016 12:22AM
