Shinae Wyckoff’s Reviews > Begin > Status Update

This book needs a good editor. There is a cute story in here - a gentle adventure for reading aloud to young children - but it should be 1/3 this length. This book could be perfect for very precocious readers - a very young/innocent child with advanced reading skills who needs a long, wordy book to read. As the read-aloud parent I’m annoyed; every 20 minutes nothing is still happening.