Terri M.’s Reviews > Within > Status Update

Ten percent and there are serious timeline issues. How much time has passed? I have no clue, and one minute it seems only 24 hours has passed and other times months. And then I encounter this... "It was all he could do just to rest his hand on the pummel of his wicked sword."

I am so confused. Why does the POV keep changing? Why do I have to relive the same scene (at least I THINK it's the same scene over again? CONFUSION REIGNS,