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Simply too full of alliteration and symbolism…”a lifelong career down in the dusky darkness had lurked like a spectre stalking the subconscious, casting a pall over everything.” to the detriment of moving the story forward. It seems to take an age to progress.
— Jan 23, 2025 08:54AM
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John Grinstead
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Walking, he notes Alpaca - would they make a reappearance or are they just for effect? - and a significant badger sett whose location he noted. Why? Does it have a significance that we will return to or is it a dead end?
— Jan 23, 2025 09:15AM
