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is 53% done
Woow, so far 🤌🤌🤌🤌
My only critiques so far
1. MMC you got some other responsibilities beyond your lady. Priorities my dude (like running a kingdom????)
2. I danno I feel like we lost the plot with the whole if he dies, Sgaeyl dies so then Tairn dies then Vi dies. We shall see
3. Wish we saw more of the relationship between V and her dragons. I wanna read about that tooo 🥹
— May 15, 2025 05:10AM
My only critiques so far
1. MMC you got some other responsibilities beyond your lady. Priorities my dude (like running a kingdom????)
2. I danno I feel like we lost the plot with the whole if he dies, Sgaeyl dies so then Tairn dies then Vi dies. We shall see
3. Wish we saw more of the relationship between V and her dragons. I wanna read about that tooo 🥹
