Natasha’s Reviews > Onyx Storm > Status Update

they just f*cked so things have to go downhill from, this book has been such a slog this last 20% better be worth it

hey besties, I feel like I'm going a bit mad reading this 🫠 how am I 400 pages in, and all we've done is go to different islands and talk to different leaders? I'm bored

no way does this book need to be almost 800 pages literally, so much happens, but yet nothing happens at all ?? Everything is so repetitive. They go talk to someone they get in a fight and then get out. Plot armour is plot armouring

low key dont really know what's going on why are we jumping everywhere

I don't know if I can do it, why is every other paragraph written to be a highlight or "quote" like babe just tell the story instead of writing these cringy lines that'll boost your books hype on tik tok