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Maya
is 18% done
Garrick has a second signet as well because of course he does and Violet will get another one too because of course she will. I greatly dislike how underdeveloped and overpowered the magic is. It ruins the tension of all action scenes. It’s The Inheritance Cycle all over again. Our main characters are just gods. There are no stakes
— Jan 30, 2025 10:46AM
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Maya
is 15% done
Violet’s ward plan legit makes no sense. She fucks with the wards, allowing the gryphon folk to use their powers in death college, which in turn reignites the alliance negations… somehow. And then the pardons that she and her friends got for the shit they did last book somehow excuses them of the crime they just committed. Thats not how that works, Yarros! My head hurts.
— Jan 30, 2025 09:58AM
Maya
is 13% done
This is one of the most confusing openings to any book I have ever read. I have no idea what’s happening. Characters are throwing out terms and names without explanation. Violet and her crew are doing stuff that is vaguely written and confusing to understand. I fucking hate this. I don’t know if I’m going to finish this. I’m starting to get a headache.
— Jan 30, 2025 09:38AM
