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it’s interesting, but it’s not enthralling. it’s taking me so much longer to read in comparison to the others
— Feb 02, 2025 04:36AM
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Feb 02, 2025 02:33AM
does the writing get better after the first book?
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honestly, i found the first book to be the best. the writing is still very young adult commentary (lots of unnecessary swearing, lots of horny and immature internal monologue), but in THIS one, the narrative and characters are more dull. it’s not as exciting.
