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Started off great. Then it was just running around too different but the same places. 3-4 safe houses when one will do. Also the words the atmosphere was so thick it was palpable was said too often. If the reader and writer are on the same page you wouldn’t need to repeat the same things over and over.
Might try to finish this novel at a later date. Jack noble has come a long way that’s for sure.
— Jan 31, 2025 06:33PM
Might try to finish this novel at a later date. Jack noble has come a long way that’s for sure.
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I will not finish this book. I’ve read the word palpable 50 times. Also taking me to multiple safe houses only to take me to more safe houses. It’s like the story is on repeat. You could have condensed 5 chapters into one. The book just does not make sense in how you are progressing in the story.
— May 17, 2025 01:01AM
