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"Outside the palace, the air is as cold as a bronze blade pressed to the skin."
"She feels all happiness flowing away from her, as water drips to the ground when a soaked tunic is squeezed."
I'm not sure what these analogies add to the story. I'd be fully immersed in the story and then some odd analogy such as these comes along and ruins the mood.
— Feb 01, 2025 02:35PM
"She feels all happiness flowing away from her, as water drips to the ground when a soaked tunic is squeezed."
I'm not sure what these analogies add to the story. I'd be fully immersed in the story and then some odd analogy such as these comes along and ruins the mood.
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I need to finish this ASAP. I can feel an oncoming reading slump, and I don't know if this one's causing it or what.
— Feb 05, 2025 08:46AM
