Majel’s Reviews > Fourth Wing > Status Update

The writing. YA sickening. "He's the most exquisite man I've ever seen. And living in a war college means I've seen a *lot* of men....Flaming hot. Scorching hot. Gets-you-into-trouble-and-you-like-it level of hot."
A lack of immersion into the world. E.g., a cadet runs screaming from the dragons and is scortched to ash. The reader is not given enough description/feeling to be afraid of the dragons to understand why.