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Sally
is on page 365 of 544
Ridoc is a good lad and really laid it out for Vi and I was proud of him.
It's defo got a lot better for me now... there's more pressure on the group, tension and anxiety provoking situations, where as at the start it was too confusing and a little YA for me... a bit "HS drama ish"
— Feb 02, 2025 02:14PM
It's defo got a lot better for me now... there's more pressure on the group, tension and anxiety provoking situations, where as at the start it was too confusing and a little YA for me... a bit "HS drama ish"
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Sally
is on page 221 of 544
It's getting a little better... still kinda cheesy... the spice is ok.
Some parts aren't explained enough for me personally and it takes away from the moment.
Lots of writing without really saying much.
— Jan 30, 2025 02:13PM
Some parts aren't explained enough for me personally and it takes away from the moment.
Lots of writing without really saying much.
Sally
is on page 119 of 544
Chapter 14...
So far it's been chaotic, confusing and discombobulating
There's been intros of new places, new people and ZERO CONTEXT
Please, in your next book, give a short 1 or 2 sentence hint at who and what things are... Just reminders, please
— Jan 28, 2025 02:22PM
So far it's been chaotic, confusing and discombobulating
There's been intros of new places, new people and ZERO CONTEXT
Please, in your next book, give a short 1 or 2 sentence hint at who and what things are... Just reminders, please
Sally
is on page 25 of 544
Venin have infiltrated Basgiath after the battle. Disguised as scribes.
They've killed all in the infirmary wing.
Violet, Ridoc, Rhi et al, have defeated them and Xaden came to help at end too.
His eyes aren't red, no veins but he's said he can feel the Venin calling to him and he can feel them too as he is one of them now
— Jan 26, 2025 12:29PM
They've killed all in the infirmary wing.
Violet, Ridoc, Rhi et al, have defeated them and Xaden came to help at end too.
His eyes aren't red, no veins but he's said he can feel the Venin calling to him and he can feel them too as he is one of them now
