Melissa’s Reviews > Fear the Flames > Status Update

I want to love this story, but it's feeling a little cringy. First of all, I'm embarrassed for the main character that she created her own kingdom that nobody has ever seen or stumbled across and calls herself a queen. Secondly, I can't stand how aggressively flirty and sarcastic every interaction is. Let's have a little mystery or something building up to this relationship that I'm sure will arise soon.