Listening to review feedback is so important as a writer if you ask me. So much so that I went back to my novels 'Out of the Shadows' and 'Underground Murmurs' and made significant changes.

In particular I re-wrote the start of 'Out of the Shadows' to focus more on the main characters of Olsen and Deane. I also added in an additional Akira storyline and made some other tweaks throughout.

I also used the Pro-Writing Aid online tool to make sure the grammar was as good as it could be - I would recommend this tool!

I've adjusted the Amazon keywords and associated book categories and so far I've seen the downloads double.

If you want a FREE copy of Book 1 'Out of the Shadows', download now from Amazon and join the adventure!

Out of the Shadows

Underground Murmurs