You have spoken - and I have listened!
The general feedback
Exhumation: An Epic of Existentia has received is that the story is great, BUT 'starts slow', 'hard to get into', 'once you get over the hump'...
Well, I'm going to fix that.
I didn't realise how much inadvertent info-dumping I unleashed on you, my unsuspecting victims.
I am working on a second edition, making the opening few chapters much easier to read and making the action and dialogue flow much better.
The story and plot hasn't changed in any way.
Thank you all who had given a review, you've helped me become a better writer!
Published on January 20, 2018 20:58