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GJ
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Aug 25, 2019 08:32PM
Oh, goodness. I don't believe your book was unread. I read it. As far as unloved...I love to read but I love very few books. Your story was intriguing and had a ton of promise but I felt it needed more work and editing. Your main character is interesting. More development was needed, more work on the story line at the end. fewer typos/errors. They were quite distracting. Anyway that's just my opinion for what it's worth. Rework it, rewrite, and do it again if it is something you want to do. If you want to write, do it. Writing is very difficult. Good luck with it. And, good luck with the upcoming school year. Where did the summer go?
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