The Hotwife Adventure - A Wife Sharing Romance Prologue by Karly Violet

My rating: 3 of 5 stars


Review based on free copy. This is a normally free work of around 35 pgs and will judged as that. Author is a writer of erotica and uses her stories to pull you into the character so you will follow them into the next book. How did this work? I found it lacking.

This is a Hotwire tale with two sex scenes. The first, the private eye husband catches a straying hubby as he was hired to do. Watches sex scene and then gets caught spying. The strange way of telling? There's the girl hubby was cheating with and she goes into great detail how getting caught could screw up her life. Her dad would go nut and all. So next we have the wife's view which I found had to follow with my mind wanting to go back to her husbands view point. But the real strange way of telling this tale? The wife’s view on cheating, the second sex scene.

I have found that the people that buy hot wife stories usually want the wife to feel something major about the event. This woman was lukewarm at best, like she was going to cheat today and this guy happened to be there. Passes off her years of marriage like it was no biggie. More worried about how the sex ended than the marriage it might have ended. There was no, should I? Shouldn't I? What have I done? How can I still save my marriage? Should I save my marriage if I'm this easily led astray? The act of cheating, which is the corner stone of hotwifing and the emotional pivot point for hot wife readers, was left empty as a prostitute plowing through her work day. The first girl in the first sex scene was more wooded about getting caught than the wife was.

Overall a gave it a three because it was well written and as a free read it was all right. Just not enough to pull me into the paid story.



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