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Published on May 06, 2025 07:04
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message 1: by Dallas (new)

Dallas Dunlap Hi - My latest book - a novella, really, went live on Amazon in April. So far, nobody has reviewed it and it isn't doing as well as the first three books in the "Story of Nikki" series.
"La Esclava" takes Nikki to a new phase of slavery on a Caribbean island owned by her master, Mr. Moore.
It's actually a love story- within a weird context - and it describes the end of Nikki's adventures as a sex slave.
So, I'd appreciate a rating and a review. These help guide possible buyers and also help me improve a writer.


message 2: by Peter (new)

Peter Rook Amazon can be tricky. Have you listed it on any other platform? Erotic Network?


message 3: by Dallas (new)

Dallas Dunlap Peter wrote: "Amazon can be tricky. Have you listed it on any other platform? Erotic Network?"

Hi - No, just doing Amazon right now. To get on Kindle Select it has to be exclusive to Amazon. But I might send it to other platforms later on.


message 4: by Meng (last edited May 12, 2025 03:46PM) (new)

Meng Dallas wrote: "Hi - My latest book - a novella, really, went live on Amazon in April. So far, nobody has reviewed it and it isn't doing as well as the first three books in the "Story of Nikki" series.
"La Esclava..."


Dear Mr Dunlap,
Hi, I bought all four of your "Story of Nikki" series on Amazon. To be honest, I think the fourth one is a bit short, and I am more interested in the first three books about Nikki's slave training. But I am looking forward to your next apocalyptic slave series and hope to read it soon.

In addition, I personally prefer a non-modern fictional world background, whether it is apocalyptic, ancient, the last century or a future utopia. The related novels include "Aristocracy Book 1-5 by Ashley Zacharias" and "Female, Recreational Book 1-5 by Badger Therese" which were on your bookshelf. I also personally recommend "The Department of Carnal Relations Book 1-3 by Paul Blades", "Daisy, Sold! by Henry Sparrowhawk", and "Hyperborean series by Alice Sinclair". I hope these can provide some inspiration for your creation.

Best Regards


message 5: by Dallas (new)

Dallas Dunlap Meng wrote: "Dallas wrote: "Hi - My latest book - a novella, really, went live on Amazon in April. So far, nobody has reviewed it and it isn't doing as well as the first three books in the "Story of Nikki" seri..."

Meng wrote: "Dallas wrote: "Hi - My latest book - a novella, really, went live on Amazon in April. So far, nobody has reviewed it and it isn't doing as well as the first three books in the "Story of Nikki" seri..."


Hi - I'm glad that you like (at least) the first three books of the Nikki series. The 4th book finishes that story and, I have to say, her tenure on the island was relatively uneventful so I didn't need to belabor it.
She appears as one of two main characters in a book I'm working on now. Of course, she is no longer a slave, but is still involved in a mystery.
Thank you for your recommendations. I'll try to read them as the opportunity arises. I have a number of writing projects underway and so I'm pretty time constrained. But I like to hear from readers like yourself as to reading suggestions and suggestions on how I can improve as a writer.

Keep in touch. Thank you. Dallas


message 6: by Meng (new)

Meng Dallas wrote: "Meng wrote: "Dallas wrote: "Hi - My latest book - a novella, really, went live on Amazon in April. So far, nobody has reviewed it and it isn't doing as well as the first three books in the "Story o..."
Dear Mr Dunlap, It’s been three months since the last Nikki’s story was published. What are you working on now? I’m looking forward to read your next book. Wish you all the best.


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