Review of New Erik Svalbard
I just purchased and read Svalbard's "Spanked on the Rails 2: Female Management."
Here is my Amazon review:
So, Emily is going to Syracuse to university there, and to save money she is going Comfort Class which, unbeknownst to her, involves her being available to serve meals and provide entertainment to other passengers while nude and in chains.
So far, just fun erotica.
En route, she meets a psychology professor who specializes in Female Management - which is a thing in this alternative world. He offers to help Emily finance her studies if she takes his class and becomes one of his "research assistants."
Once at uni, stuff gets real. Emily finds that her expected financial aid isn't available and so she has no choice but to take up the Professor's offer.
IOW, the novella turns dark fast.
So, to avoid any further spoilers:
This is very well written. The protagonist (Emily) and important ancillary characters are well developed. We understand their goals and emotions. The writer is economical but in his descriptions of settings. So the reader has a good idea of who the characters are and where they are.
When the work enters a suspenseful phase, the writer is able to make us care about Emily and so maintains the suspense.
Good job.
Should you buy the book? Yes. It's well worth the money.
Here is my Amazon review:
So, Emily is going to Syracuse to university there, and to save money she is going Comfort Class which, unbeknownst to her, involves her being available to serve meals and provide entertainment to other passengers while nude and in chains.
So far, just fun erotica.
En route, she meets a psychology professor who specializes in Female Management - which is a thing in this alternative world. He offers to help Emily finance her studies if she takes his class and becomes one of his "research assistants."
Once at uni, stuff gets real. Emily finds that her expected financial aid isn't available and so she has no choice but to take up the Professor's offer.
IOW, the novella turns dark fast.
So, to avoid any further spoilers:
This is very well written. The protagonist (Emily) and important ancillary characters are well developed. We understand their goals and emotions. The writer is economical but in his descriptions of settings. So the reader has a good idea of who the characters are and where they are.
When the work enters a suspenseful phase, the writer is able to make us care about Emily and so maintains the suspense.
Good job.
Should you buy the book? Yes. It's well worth the money.
Published on June 18, 2025 21:13
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I'm getting back into the writing world again after a long illness and withdrawal. The books I've already published primarily center around a fictional Florida county, a young woman named Donna Parker
I'm getting back into the writing world again after a long illness and withdrawal. The books I've already published primarily center around a fictional Florida county, a young woman named Donna Parker, who is a major player in the law enforcement community there.
And, oh, yeah, there are also vampires and time travel. Typical rural Florida.
"The Cabin" is a YA book. The others are pretty graphic.
I've recently cranked out four new books which are more BDSM oriented. IOW, graphic WRT sex.
So, this blog is designed to update my surviving old fans and hopefully, my new ones, on my progress getting these out as e-books. So, stay tuned. ...more
And, oh, yeah, there are also vampires and time travel. Typical rural Florida.
"The Cabin" is a YA book. The others are pretty graphic.
I've recently cranked out four new books which are more BDSM oriented. IOW, graphic WRT sex.
So, this blog is designed to update my surviving old fans and hopefully, my new ones, on my progress getting these out as e-books. So, stay tuned. ...more
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