Revising GIFTED

With certain things about my book brought to my attn, use of redundant phrases, character development, and a storyline that moves too fast. I have decided to do a complete revision of the book. The story will stay the same, however, I plan to put a bit more history into the characters, I also want to build a bit more romance between a couple characters (but not too much as the first book is suppose to be about friendship).
I would happily consider other ideas you might like to add. In the end, I will probably add 15k-25k more words...possibly more.
Twilight was 130k words when it was submitted! That is a big no no in the world of traditional publishing! However, we no longer live in that world and the rules are being rewritten every day.
With that being said, Happy New Year everyone!! Let's get things started!!
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Published on January 01, 2013 17:56
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Jim Ellis The final revision has been done to GIFTED and is now being edited by someone better "Gifted" in that area than I!


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