A Taste of Cian

Dew from the ground under my hands was nothing like it had ever felt before, slimy and cold seemed to almost seep in, the tingling burned my palms, through to the bone, I quickly put them as close to my face as I could but the excruciating sun penetrated my eyes yielding me from examining them.

My attentions were quickly diverted to the aroma of morning, a magnificent bouquet in my senses for I didn’t just smell, I could taste the moisture swirling about me, feel the tiny droplets of condensation gather in my hand. My ears so pristine I could hear the deer and hares racing through the forest and I could see more than a mile before me; but the lust for blood was the most powerful sense of all.

“Keane……..Finn………FALLON!!!!” I scream, my throat parched yet burned as my own voice a terrible drum rattling my head. But they are gone.

“Maggie” I whisper, before sulking to the damp forest floor.

I stagger to my feet feeling as if I had engaged in the game of drink the night before. Taking in the exquisiteness of my surroundings I noticed on the moss covered tree stump, beside a large bundle of herbs, a stone bowl with a shallow black liquid sitting on top of a piece of parchment. The note read:

Each drink from the bowl.
A pinch before sunset.
Your sister is safe.
Leave now.

The note signed with an elaborate “G”.
With nowhere to go, my sister opted to stay with the priestess. Since she had not invoked the evil as my brethren and I, she was safe. I was advised by the priestess to sever contact with my sister, knowing what I am could place Maggie in grave danger. I follow the parchment’s directions and left the area with the herbs from the priestess, still no sign of my brothers. The herb, if eaten before sunset would prevent me from burning come sunrise. It grew among the Liverwort, Primrose and Hard Ferns, vast in the forests and glens of Dalry and to continue my human routine I used the plant relentlessly; one of a many regrets I have of this immortal life.

With it I am a stealth creature during the day and night, a luxury I wish I had today, for without it I am subjected to day-stasis. Even now I don’t recall the name of our saving grace herb but I will never forget what it looked like. A muted aquamarine, in color, hints of orange and purple, a lush little bundle of saving grace. The genus became extinct in the late 1800’s plunging us into the life of night and almost a hundred years later; we lost touch with each other.
I make the trek back to the outskirts of my village home, stopping at the makeshift camp; I duck to enter the primitively erected shelter when I hear the distant snap of twigs and familiar scents, I turn, crouched for attack when the familiar smells reveal themselves, the faces of my brothers, Keane, Finn and Fallon greeted me. They look like my brothers, but don’t. Their skin is cold as well is my own, their eyes are more vibrant than I have ever seen and the small cracks and wrinkles in their skin had filled. I, like them, longed to gaze upon our enhanced appearance. Quietly we celebrated the unprecedented force we now possessed, before methodically exacting our revenge.

My name is Cian, pronounced (KANE).

Vampire (vam’pir) n. 1. In folk tales, a dead body that moves about at night, sucking the blood of sleeping persons. Rest assured, you don’t have to be asleep to sustain a vampire attack, it fact we prefer live prey, the hunt is a primal, exotic force within us. 2. A person who gets things from others in a wicked or evil way. I have to agree with this one, but we aren’t “people”. We haven’t been people in a VERY long time.

I myself have been so since the fall of the Roman Empire. I am of course fast, and strong beyond human comprehension, a firm handshake from me and forget about ever using that hand again.

As vampires we are, at first, extremely attractive to humans, their downfall considering what attracts them turns out to be a malicious, calculating bastard of a monster set out to torture, rape and kill. Although our initial beauty is not our only means of coercion, we also possess the ability to “control” humans though hypnotism with the inflection of the color of our eyes; seen to humans as dark at first slowly becoming lighter drawing the prey in, some vampires are able to use touch. We are also blessed with individual “gifts”, abilities all our own that are dynamically enhanced. For some it’s a skill possessed in life that crosses over to immortality for others it’s a newly acquired ability.
Immortality is a loaded word. We can survive gunshots, stab wounds, explosions and disease; however we cannot endure decapitation, fire or sun light. Ultra-violet light can injure and prolong us, but it will not kill us. Our blood quickly heals mortal wounds and if preformed correctly can make another of our kind, among many other abilities and details. However, because of the way I was created; I am unable to make another. What you learn from movies and books isn’t all Hollywood glitz and glamour, besides the ridiculous; no reflection, fear of crucifixes, holy water. I have often thought that one of our kind was influencing Tinsel town.

My human life at the time of my birth was a typical one. In a small hut on the vast rolling green hills of what would become Edinburgh, Scotland I am born to a proud, masculine Votadini warrior who was also chief of our small Brythonic tribe. My father a stalwart oak tree of a man who commanded attention where ever he roam, proved to be a firm but fair ruler. My mother was a soothsayer and what is considered today a doctor. She was kind, compassionate and warm, a quiet demonstrative woman. Well respected in our community, she had been the village mid-wife prior to my father taking her as his wife, upon the marriage her status among the people was a welcome one. I also had a younger sister by eleven years, Maggie. A sweet, innocent girl, just making her way in her life, at fifteen a girl of our village would soon marry and I would be kidding myself if I didn’t admit to wanting to slit the throat of every male youth that came courting. My kin were considered the most ancient civilization to settle the land or so I would later research and learn.

The expectation of my mortal life was to be a great warrior, succeeding my father as head elder. Rule, marry, make children, and then die. Trained from the time I was six years old, my father taught me to wield a sword protecting our land and the people of our village from Roman invasion. My father taught me to care for the pain of others, to never forget that being a warrior meant rising above yourself to protect those who are not able to protect themselves, what’s the line from “Spiderman”, “With great power comes great responsibility”? Basic principles for a future leader.

I lived my life as a proud son and soldier going to battle at a moment’s notice. My father was considered a king among our civilization, revered for his length of time in power, by some. No other chief or king had survived as long as my father and to others among the village it was a frustrating factor.
I was sixteen when I began to hear the rumblings from up and coming males, how my father had selfishly preserved the title for himself and his lineage. Seemed to me, even at that time it wasn’t a title he wished to preserve, but his own life. By the time I was twenty six my father was hideously mutinied upon, ownership of the title extinguished along with his and my mother’s lives. I, along with my younger sister and three of my brothers in arms, Keane, Fallon and Finn, escaped the fray; making camp just outside the lines of village territory.
Keane was not a man of great stature or status, in our village his father was a well known drunk. Once a great man; Keane’s father had fallen on hard times and he wasn’t the only one to suffer the effects. His mother eventually left our village, taking his younger brother and sister. Keane stood around 5 foot 11 and of stout build, he had had knotted sandy blonde hair, dreadlocks as they are called today and they hung past his shoulders baring certain trinkets he collected from his victims in battle. Keane’s eyes were steel gray blue and if you stood next to him by the sea, there wasn’t much difference between the two shades of blue.

The brothers; Finn and Fallon were identical twins, tall and lanky, 6 foot 7 at least, with long bone-straight brown hair, each man’s head displayed sporadic braids littering its mass. The twins had dark green eyes with yellow barbs around the pupils, which even in mortal life were fierce to behold, but they had baby faces, giving them a unique appearance. We all dressed very similarly and simplistically, lightweight clothes under hide armor and various straps fastening our weapons to our bodies. We may have looked the same, but we were far from it. While the twins were bloodthirsty, even in life, Keane and I shared a desire for peace. The twin’s father, prior to his own death, chief of defenses in our village taught his sons to revel in the kill, my father and theirs had many a conflict but mutual respect for one another. Fallon’s instrument of death was a Morning Star; a club with a spiked ball on the top. He notched the instrument after each kill. Fallon’s Morning Star was overly full by the time the turn of the century rolled around, instead of notches the man had X’s up and down the shaft, the numbers doubling and tripling over the years.

Finn specialized in hand to hand combat, never using a weapon. In battles, before we were cast out, Finn would be mocked for his lack of arsenal on the battlefield, soon proving his worth. Finn’s kill marks began at his shoulders. Saying his own body was his weapon, he privately notched his skin after battle, calling it a meditation of sorts.

The morning after the mutiny, we left our makeshift camp in heading on foot across the countryside to what is now called Dalry, North Ayrshire in the Garnock Valley of Scotland. The journey was hard and not having the luxury of at least one horse was difficult for my sister, not being trained as we were to trek long ranges. She slowed us and by the time we reached the tiny hut in the forest; Maggie was being carried by Keane. Keane always had a fondness for Maggie as his own sister who was around her age had been taken from this life too young. The hut belonged to a well known and feared priestess.

I along with my brothers and sister were accepted into the home of the priestess a little more than seventy miles from our home. She heard quite quickly of the upheaval and grave condition we came to her in. After taking in all she had heard, it was apparent that we were no longer welcome in our own village. The priestess gave us shelter and food but I could sense she had a strange air about her. She was a beautiful young woman, looking no older than twenty one. Her ice blue eyes peeked through ash-blonde hair that waved around her face as she moved. Her tattered clothes hung off her young body and this caught the attention of the twins. She was barefoot and remained so, even when out in the forest. With disapproving glances from me and Keane the brothers ceased their stares of the young woman.

Over a hot meal the woman listened to our plight and offered a solution. Her dialect was thicker than ours but we had little difficulty understanding her proposal. After we were fed my sister and I went for a walk to discuss our delicate situation. I explained to her the priestess’s solution and after hurtful words were exchanged we finally agreed. Once my sister fell asleep, the woman explained the process of what we were to undergo, including that our appearance would remain for eternity should we wish it. I cut my hair and shaved to resemble the Romans. Keane agreed and did his best to remove the dreadlocks, cutting his hair to shoulder length and being that he barely shaved, kept his scruff. The twins; arrogant as they were, remained as they were.
The young woman carried a stone bowl as she led us out of the hut and into the woods, bending ever so often to pick a flower or dig up a root. About a hundred and fifty feet from her hut we came upon a secluded area; in the shape of a perfect circle the ground and forest floor had been cleared and a large tree stump sat directly center. The woman positioned us in a five point star inside the circle, placed the bowl carefully on the tree stump and dumped her forest finds inside. She reached under her dress, presented a vial of dark liquid, whispering something indiscernible into it and poured it on top of the greenery. She waved one of her delicate hands over the bowl as four separate smoke trails began to rise from it. She reached under her dress a final time revealing an ornate dagger; the smoke hovered over each of our heads as the woman took each of our hands and drew blood.

As the dagger collected the blood the smoke lingering overhead violently entered our bodies. The woman placed herself as the top point of the star pattern, which was just off center, raised her hands to the sky and began chanting it again. Her eyes became cloudy at first then fierce as the ice blue encased a red center. A great wind blew through and her hair was shoved backward to reveal a demonic face with a mouth full of sharp glittering teeth. The volume of her chanting increased momentarily and the four of us dropped to our knees, suddenly her chanting stopped. What followed was more excruciating than any battle wound. My bones felt as if they were breaking, my insides seized and my head pounded; blackness consumed me. We woke in the morning; our senses more acute than ever before. It was time.

Revelations of Cian
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Published on August 29, 2013 10:54 Tags: art, history, romance, vampire
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message 1: by G.D. (new)

G.D. Ogan I loved this snippet of your novel...what a great writer you are...I'm jealous so now I'm a FAN! Please take a peak at my "Immortal Relations" guardian vampire novels if you get time, while I'm told they are unique I like your style of writing more!


message 2: by G.D. (last edited Sep 04, 2013 12:11PM) (new)

G.D. Ogan The first novel is perhaps too "adult" there is a LOT of EXPLICIT TOGETHERNESS (sex) in it. I wrote it that way to confirm that my vampires, while protective of humans and animals DO NOT suffer the sexual hang-ups of humans. I may go back and edit out a bit of the explicit parts of the "mind-meld" training with multiple participants. The local brick and mortar bookstore that carries my novels had a complaint that the first one was "Erotica" and they had to move it to that area of shelves (it sold more copies there in a week than it had in months in the main area). LOL If you're brave http://amzn.com/B006ZCBT6G is Book one (I'll edit it soon for some errors I've found). The second book is a lot better novel IMHO. It is packed with action. http://amzn.com/B00A4IEHL6 The third book will infuriate those who support the current regime in Washington, but I just extrapolate what they have been doing already and place them in the situation of my book, so I feel their actions are right on for the way they have already behaved. Don't have a link for it yet. Thanks again for taking a look at them...please tell me what you think...my writing style is more like the old, cold warrior that I am rather than the lovely prose you turn out...oh, how I wish I could do what you do!!!


message 3: by G.D. (last edited Sep 04, 2013 10:54PM) (new)

G.D. Ogan Thanks for your comment, I may modify the "seven on one" scene a little and the joint mating of vampire mother & "adopted" vampire daughter with the human they recently turned. It may make the first novel a little less like erotica. It seems (locally at least) that books run into trouble when considered Erotica, while Erotic doesn't get folks riled up as much. I think it is a matter of "degrees" and that is what the problem currently seems to be at my local bookstore. I just dropped both the first and second novel's price down to 99 cents on Kindle to maybe get some more feedback. It only has three comments right now and while five stars, I don't think that is indicative of how most readers will view it. There are a number of technical glitches as well I've found. So I'm at the very least going to make those changes.


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G.D. Ogan I agree KDP is great; however, I loved writing my first novel almost as much as the second. The first felt a little as if I was "channeling it" (I know, that is weird for someone trained in psychology, but I've seen channeling and remote viewing before, just NOT from me!) LOL I think the second one was more fun because the characters are now my friends & I've even become emotional when one is sick (as a human). That may mean it is time for my formal psychological evaluation - but they do seem to have become REAL to me (Cue the theme from the old Television show The Twilight Zone and watch Rod Serling (reanimated) discuss this author's mental breakdown! LOL I will say the third in the series was more difficult to write as it discusses the terrible danger our country is really faced with - that is a highly emotional topic for any old soldier. How I wish my good vampires were really around to safeguard our Constitutional freedoms. By the way, I just dropped the price on my first two down to .99 and JUST SO YOU WON'T HAVE TO PAY EVEN THAT, I'm putting both up for FREE: the first on Oct. 3-5 & the second book FREE on Oct. 6 & 7. I hadn't used my KDP Free Days in a very long time (not since my first book came out, I think those five days were in 2012.


message 5: by G.D. (new)

G.D. Ogan Sorry I missed saying Happy Birthday on your special day! Yes, borderline craziness is helpful for a writer of any genre' that has an element of fantasy. Perhaps it is my 20+ years in the military but indecisiveness has never been my problem. I often think the problem I have is the "Fools rush in where angles fear to tread" the opposite problem to yours. LOL


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G.D. Ogan Back at you on success...for me it isn't the $$ it is getting my stories in the hands of readers (print or digital). My characters, who I love deserve to be "brought to life" through their being shared and I believe strongly in their message of goodness and protecting our Constitution and Bill of Rights from the evil usurpers!


message 7: by G.D. (new)

G.D. Ogan I've come to the realization that I write so that I can keep my communication with my friends whose story I get the honor of telling (Alternate Universe???). LOL


message 8: by G.D. (new)

G.D. Ogan Gary Logan is Guy Ogan...maybe that is one reason I like him so much! Now if he only had Maggie by his side! LOL


message 9: by G.D. (new)

G.D. Ogan Yeah and if I found Maggie, I'd follow her to the ends of the Earth, and forever, if she'd have me!


message 10: by G.D. (last edited Oct 07, 2013 09:05PM) (new)

G.D. Ogan I'd downloaded your new book the other night but was still reading "Underground Vampire" (rather long with lots of twists and turns...ending was a downer but that may just be a set-up for a rehabilitating sequel, at least I hope that is the intent). Anyway, I've just started to read it, but have to drive to Fort Worth to put the crew on a flight to Southern California so won't get much time to do more reading until I get back later in the week. Hope you have a great week yourself...hope to hear your good sales numbers soon!


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G.D. Ogan I'd committed to being on several blogs during that time period (long before the Disneyland thing came up) & my "passion" is not "carnival rides" but writing and reading works of great (if under appreciated) writers, such as yourself! (-;


message 12: by G.D. (new)

G.D. Ogan I've been so busy I haven't had time to check all the E-Mails and sites...sounds like you've been busy as well what with your new website and now being asked to write the article! SO COOL...wishing you the VERY BEST!


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G.D. Ogan I agree (after all Blood is thicker than Water) LOL I got back from my two-day trip picking up the two adult ladies and five "children" (only one of which is of child size - three are adult size & a "girl-friend" of our "out-of-control 17 year old stud*" who went along is a bit shorter than the two adults). They only went to Disneyland one day as the real reason they went was to attend a wedding.
*I'm sure the Marine Corp could shape him up -and he needs it!
FYI: Tomorrow (Tuesday) at 1:00 PM EST, I'm supposed to be on a Blog tomorrow - I believe I'm to be ready to answer questions (I've never done that kind of Blog before) but I'll stand-by to do so. Here is the link when it goes active: Lisa Mondello's blog site is scheduled to post on Tuesday, October 15th at 1:00am EST : www.lisamondello.blogspot.com.


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G.D. Ogan THANKS MUCHO! I've got to sign off in a few but the blog goes on for another couple of hours for the West Coast Crowd I guess.


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G.D. Ogan Lisa Mondello did a GREAT JOB of putting together what I'd sent her for the blog. While it got no comments I hope a few folks stopped in long enough to see that I do have a series of novels and maybe the main title will stick in someone's memory. As always, thank you for your kindness and supportive comments...it really makes "promoting the books" less daunting to have someone who understands. (-;


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G.D. Ogan Yeah I was going to do a blog hop type thing with Paul but I couldn't figure out how to get the connections to the other authors posted to my part of the blog, so I dropped out. I may do some one on one blogs but I'll never try a blog hop again...to confusing for an old man like me. As for advertising on your car I've had bumper-stickers made up that say:
"Immortal Relations" a very
Unique Paranormal Romance
Series on Amazon and Kindle

The background is bright red with white letters and I had "business cards" made up with a tiny picture of the cover of my second book with the http:// codes of all three books as well as my name and BlogSpot.com but I like your idea of using "Tempura" paint on the car, truck or van! (-;


message 17: by G.D. (last edited Oct 17, 2013 08:41AM) (new)

G.D. Ogan You can E-Mail me at gog6692@msn.com and give me your mailing address and I'll mail you a bumpersticker and a few of my cards (the cards are rather "busy" as they contain a LOT of information), but it may give you an idea for cards with a bit less on them. I get my stuff made at buildasign.com 11525A Stonehollow Dr., Austin, TX 78758. They have an on-line location connected with their .com that lets you design and see what your sign (or whatever) will look like and you can stretch the letters to run to the edge of the bumper-sticker, card or what have you to get more on what you design (which of course makes a card "busy" as mine will attest), but I like the way the bumper-stickers turned out. (-:


message 18: by G.D. (new)

G.D. Ogan Hope you have a great weekend! I'll get a pair of bumper-stickers in the mail to you today along with a few of those cards I told you about.


message 19: by G.D. (new)

G.D. Ogan That is awesome...is she in a band?!! How totally cool that would be. I used to have an electric guitar but as I was a "Lefty" everything was upside down...kind of like me I guess! LOO+L


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G.D. Ogan Yes, but we are in our "right minds." LOL


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G.D. Ogan You're such a sweetheart! BTW I just posted my comment on the first book...it was great!


message 22: by G.D. (new)

G.D. Ogan You are more than welcome...hey, did you ever get the chance to finish either of my Kindle books...probably not with all you are doing right now (the saying: As busy as a one armed paper=hanger in a storm comes to mind! LOL


message 23: by G.D. (new)

G.D. Ogan Oh I SOOO look forward to what you think once you've finished book one and start into book two! By the way, I'm mentioning "Revelations of Cian" on a blog write-up I'm doing for the 27th with Leesie Lis. It asked for my latest "Keeper" added to my bookshelf! (-;


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G.D. Ogan Your a sweetheart! I was over at our car club tonight and several of the fellows said they would come over to the Halloween night book signing at Hastings I'm having (probably just to see me in my "traditional" Vampire Costume) - of course my Guardian Vamps have normal clothes (no Goth or Frilly Cuffs for them) and they don't stick out like I will in my costume (but it's Halloween and it will be FUN)! Past book signings have only netted sales of about five or six books per title, but it is SO MUCH FUN TALKING VAMPIRES and even getting even one new reader will be worth it! If rain seems unlikely I'll drive over in our 64 Studebaker Station-wagon...it looks original but has a lot of mods to make it go, stop, steer and ride better. LOL


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G.D. Ogan OH SHAME ON ME! Did I fail to tell you that Hastings Books and Video Stores will carry (stock and sell) their LOCAL AUTHORS' BOOKS and that you can arrange for BOOK SIGNINGS (just not in the Holidays) - MY BAD! They won't order the books from CreateSpace, etc., you will have to provide them (ordered at your "author's rate + tax (yeah the book will have been taxed twice after you've paid State Tax and upon sale by Hastings).
I think my books cost me a little under $3 each but the SHIPPING IS A KILLER bringing my cost to almost $5 each, so after Hastings gets their cut (I think we do a 60-40 arrangement, 60% for me and 40% for them - but this may depend upon the store) I think I clear about $0.50 per book. But, for me, who isn't looking for big buck$ but rather to have people enjoy the world I wish I was actually "existing" in*...my book signings are a tremendous shot of ecstasy! I wonder if people like J.K Rowling, Stephenie Meyer, etc. with all their book signings enjoy them half as much as I do?! I hope you have a wonderful Friday and an even better weekend!

*Yes, I'd sign up for vampirism in a "New-York-Second" - then I'd take a trip to Washington D.C. = Constitutional Crisis averted! LOL


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G.D. Ogan I visited the store today and took them copies of my third book to put on their shelves - the new "Book Manager" was very nice and we discussed my book signing in costume and placement by the front door. I have a cardboard cut-out of Halloween's "slinky-sexy" Elvira, a silver vase with (fake) black roses and book-stands to display copies of each book. I've typed up some "community event notices" for local newspaper and television spots and some "hand-bills" to be posted at my favorite "haunts" who will display them for me. Speaking of advertising, I was on Lisa Chambers Blog today and here is the part about what has recently been added to my Keeper Shelf:

What was the last book to be added to your keeper shelf?

Well, of course, now it is: What was the last book to be added to my Kindle? "Revelations of Cian" is my most recent read and Augusta Fern is going to be the next Ann Rice I predict. Get this book as her second in the series has just been released and you’ll want to hop right into that one.

Hope you like what I said - check out her blog.


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G.D. Ogan Happy to be of some help...Ann Rice sure doesn't need any help, she probably has more adult readers (our own target audience) than J.K. Rowling and Stephenie Meyer put together (but she's been writing for a lot longer than either I believe). I loved her "Servant of the Bones" - but being boiled in Gold wouldn't be a fun way to be changed into anything! LOL


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G.D. Ogan Look @ left side - Recent bloggers: G.D. Ogan: http//lisa-chalmers.com/snarkology.blog-hop/


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G.D. Ogan Try this last one it took me there then look under "Recent Posts" and Guest Blogger: G.D. Ogan you should find it (I hope)!


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