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"On page 201, Dear lord the writing is so bad. She's trying to make Liam sound old because he's from the "older" times, but the way he talks is so unnatural. Like, "Oh dear art thou friend, I am not going to do this for thou are my dearest companion." Come onnnnn.
Also, she needs to stop using the word throbbing (non-sexual). I've read it so many times. Throbbing head, throbbing behind the eyes, etc." — Apr 21, 2026 03:17PM
"On page 201, Dear lord the writing is so bad. She's trying to make Liam sound old because he's from the "older" times, but the way he talks is so unnatural. Like, "Oh dear art thou friend, I am not going to do this for thou are my dearest companion." Come onnnnn.
Also, she needs to stop using the word throbbing (non-sexual). I've read it so many times. Throbbing head, throbbing behind the eyes, etc." — Apr 21, 2026 03:17PM
