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"On page 301, The writing is terrible. It’s all “I” statements.
“I saw the pain in her eyes.” This could easily be rewritten to, “Pain flashed in her eyes.”
Info is dumped in dialogue.
“You know that my relationship with your mother was a secret.” Just imagine this every paragraph." — 1 hour, 39 min ago
"On page 301, The writing is terrible. It’s all “I” statements.
“I saw the pain in her eyes.” This could easily be rewritten to, “Pain flashed in her eyes.”
Info is dumped in dialogue.
“You know that my relationship with your mother was a secret.” Just imagine this every paragraph." — 1 hour, 39 min ago
