Slugterra discussion

((For members of the Shane Gang))

((Hell yeah heheh

((I need to remember some caverns lol))

The main cavern and the bedrooms

((I know there's Quiet Lawn Cavern(Doubt I said that right)))

Lol idk

*shane twins walk in* morning everyone! rookie said

Emma was sitting on a couch, flipping through channels in boredom. She sighed as she continued to flip through channels.

((I wanted to start -_-))

((lol sory)) rookie walks over to emma, mornin sis, mom, dad, korg, and pronto!

((You forgot to capitalize names and add quotes when she's speaking))

Emma looked at Rookie "Hey Rukia." She said, a bored tone in her voice as she turned her attention back to TV.

((u know i dont do that! i just do it the way i do ppl know wat im doing))

((And his name is Kord not Korg))

*rookie gives hugs to everyone*

Emma hugged Rookie back, unsure why they where hugging.

((Look at how Im posting, thats usually how you role-play))

((sory its just how i am i cant keep track of evrything))

((today shall be the day rookie gets her slug gear))

((Emma's already been slug slinging for a while so she has her slugs and stuff.))

((Also your post))

((But today Emma can travel by herself))

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((knock knock im here))

((Its your turn to post Lee))

((k)) rookie said, if your wondering why im so happy today well..... today is the day i get my slugs!

((You keep forgetting quotes))


"Um, yeah kinda figured. Today's the day I get to go out on my own." Emma said.

"cool, if mom and dad let me im coming too!", she said

Emma chuckled and said, "Fine by me."

rookie looks imploringly at their parents and says, "mom dad can i?"

Emma looked at Eli and Trixie, waiting for their answer.

"sure", they said

Emma got up and smiled "Thanks, I'll make sure Rukia doesn't run into trouble."

"hey", she protested, "i can take care of myself thank you very much.. besides i got burpy to look after me too"

"If Dad allows Burpy to come with." She said.


Burpy chirped happily as if saying he wants to come with.


((The comma goes in the quotes, Burpy needs to have a capitalized B because its a name, needs to have a period behind the o of too and in front of the end quotes))

"he already said yes emma," rookie said

Emma said, "He said yes for you to come with."


((Capitalize the R in Rookie, and the E in Emma, also capitalize the H in he))

"Dad, can i take burpy and the others please," she said and gave another imploring look


Eli sighed and said, "fine, but take good care of them"

"Yay! thanks Dad!," she said as she ran over and tackled him with a hug

Emma said, "You gotta catch your own slugs though."

rookie rolled her eyes and said, "i know that and im gonna get slugs just like Dads!"

"Have fun, it'll take a while to get as much as Dad's slugs." She said.

"also can i use your mech please?," she asked


"sure but one scratch and your back to square one no leaving without one of us if that happens got it?," Eli said

Emma walked to the garage.

((You don't need commas if you have a question mark or a period in the quotes))

rookie followed and said, "im driving!"

"I have my own Mech." She said, then got onto her Mecha Beast.

"ok!" she said and hoped on the wolf mech and said, "lets go!"

Emma said, "I'm gonna be heading to the mall."

"boo!" rookie said, "im going with korg and pronto"

((Kord not Korg))

"Come on, this might be a great bonding experience." She said.

((Im planning an attack on the mall from Mitrik's bandits/followers))

((ok))
"ok!" she said and followed