The Land of Valoria(Medieval RP Group) discussion

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message 1: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
This is where you can work on your characters. :D


message 2: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
No, it's fine. She should most likely be in the Kingdom of the Heavens now, Right? :)


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

I guess, although i dont know what that is XD


message 4: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
It's the kingdom that most good humans and a few angels are.


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

ok! Yeah she would be there XD


message 6: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
Oh and Raven? What age should Rystar and Trinity star be?


Jaxon(Jax)[They-He] Trinity looks 19


message 9: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
Ok, Because I had an Idea but in order for that to happen they had to be in the war for at least a few years.


Jaxon(Jax)[They-He] Well Angels age differently than humans


message 11: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
Yea, and they are half-angels.


Jaxon(Jax)[They-He] Still, they would age differently.


message 13: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
Yea, I know I was agreeing with you. Should Rystar be older by like a year or so? (In human age.)


Jaxon(Jax)[They-He] Sure


message 15: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
Ok. And you said Trinity was 19 right?


Jaxon(Jax)[They-He] Around 18 or 19


message 17: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
Ok, then I'll make Rystar 21 or so. And now I need to find the pictures you found for him. XD


Jaxon(Jax)[They-He] We need a page for Dark elves or have their name included in the elves page


message 19: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
Ok, I'll do that soon.


Jaxon(Jax)[They-He] I am making a dark elf mage who was taken from her home to the heaven kingdom so she can use her mage powers, train them and be able to help protect.


message 21: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
Ok, but she'll be a bit bullied since the Dark Elves worked on the side of the demons in the Great War.


Jaxon(Jax)[They-He] Look at the history a bit I know that


message 23: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
Yuki~ wrote: "WIP

Name: Yukino Kiera Cadwell
Age: 14
Species: Meifwa(Mystic)
Appearance:
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Bi(?)
Alliance: Neutral.
History: When Yuki was born In NekoWarfu, which was in complete ruin..."


Actually I'm kinda wondering something, since she is now in the Kingdom of the Heavens and most Nekos are excellent blacksmiths, could your character help Rystar's father in his business now since he only has one arm now?


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeah.


message 25: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
Ok, and that would also mean that she would probably become good friends with Rystar and Trinity Star (when she is made.).


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

Yep!


message 27: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
Yea, but the only problem with that is thinking of how she and Rystar's father met.


Jaxon(Jax)[They-He] Maybe Rystar's father had noticed her and took her in like a sister. Cuz maybe she doesnt have parents


message 29: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
Well she did murder both of them...


message 30: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 01, 2018 11:28AM) (new)

Ill read Rystar's profile and see if i get any other ideas. And if i do ill run them through with you first. Does that sound ok?


message 31: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
Ok, that's fine. I have also yet to make his father too.


message 32: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 01, 2018 12:22PM) (new)

Ok i read it. And i kinda have to agree With Sylveon, its probably the best scenario.

So Yuki was wandering through the town, which she was completely unfamiliar with. She, somehow, found the Blacksmith. As she looked at all the weapons and such she got really excited. And that's when Rystar's dad met her. She was young when she met him, so naturally the first thing he asked her was where were her parents. So she told him that they were dead. He eventually told her that she can stay with them, as long as she helps around the Blacksmith.

How does that sound?


message 33: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
Sounds alright, but how long ago?


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

That i would have to think about...

Seeing as her father died when she was about 4, i'd say she lived on her own for about a year before she met Rystar's father. So she would of been around 5 when she met him?


message 35: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (last edited Mar 01, 2018 12:31PM) (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
And now she's...?


message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

Im still debating on her age, It will depend on which picture i pick for her appearance. But im thinking she should be about 14.


message 37: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
Ok, then she would've stayed with him for 9 years or so?


message 38: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeah.


message 39: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
Ok, that's fine just put that in her history then oh and the template for characters has been updated.


message 40: by [deleted user] (new)

Ok!


message 41: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
You can give your character 'Personality' now! XD


message 42: by [deleted user] (new)

Ok! I finished her history. Its about 4 paragraphs long! (tbh, probably my most detailed character yet.)


message 43: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
Ok, I'll take a look.


message 44: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
Looks great and could you also add a 'personality' tab in between gender and sexuality?


message 45: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeah ok!


message 46: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
Thanks, and can't wait until she is done. :)


message 47: by [deleted user] (new)

What do you think of her? Should i change anything?


message 48: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
One second...


message 49: by Ryan, Angel King of Valoria (new)

Ryan | 2349 comments Mod
Two things wrong, there is no guns in here since this is a medieval rp and not a modern rp. And any modern things wouldn't exist back then.


message 50: by [deleted user] (new)

Ok!


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