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Aaron L said:
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Enjoying the almost, reader's digest, short story style of writing. The focus feels like it's trying to tell the story without getting bogged down in the minutia, while doing excellent work of sprinkling in beautiful poetics right where they're needeEnjoying the almost, reader's digest, short story style of writing. The focus feels like it's trying to tell the story without getting bogged down in the minutia, while doing excellent work of sprinkling in beautiful poetics right where they're needed to emphasize the scale, the wonder, and the essence of the journey.
But in this brevity, I'm suffering the faults as well, in that the characters get so very little attention, it feels as though they were introduced through a brief exposition, and nothing more...
I feel that in time their full character might be revealed in a meaningful way that brings me to care for them, but between now and then, I bore a bit; Often wondering who is a simple throw-away, written only to be cast into crucible of the plot, as the band of travelers encounter back-to-back brushes with fate.
As of current, I've only felt suspense for the safety of the horses and the dogs......more
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