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Chronicles of Fire: Rise of the Elementals
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J.P. McNeill (Goodreads Author)

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Carolyn is finished

— Jun 28, 2013 05:31PM Add a comment

Beckie is on page 145 of 200

— Oct 07, 2011 12:07PM Add a comment

Beckie is on page 85 of 200

— Oct 06, 2011 06:43PM Add a comment

Beckie is on page 39 of 200

— Oct 06, 2011 03:51PM Add a comment

colleen the convivial curmudgeon is on page 87 of 200

"We exploded off the starting line and with Ben's help the sled gradually slid off the starting line." I think my brain just broke a little.

— Sep 05, 2011 06:00PM Add a comment

Anna (Literary Exploration) is on page 76 of 200

— Sep 05, 2011 02:44PM Add a comment

colleen the convivial curmudgeon is on page 38 of 200

The story's pretty good so far, but some of the punctuation stuff is driving me bonkers. Periods where there should be commas, and vice versa, and more semi-colons than I've ever seen in my life, at least half of which don't seem to be used properly. Also one's curiosity and/or interest is piqued, not peaked.

— Sep 05, 2011 01:27PM Add a comment

colleen the convivial curmudgeon is starting

FYI - Got this free from the author to review.

— Sep 05, 2011 09:55AM Add a comment