colleen the convivial curmudgeon’s Reviews > Chronicles of Fire: Rise of the Elementals > Status Update
colleen the convivial curmudgeon
is on page 38 of 200
The story's pretty good so far, but some of the punctuation stuff is driving me bonkers. Periods where there should be commas, and vice versa, and more semi-colons than I've ever seen in my life, at least half of which don't seem to be used properly. Also one's curiosity and/or interest is piqued, not peaked.
— Sep 05, 2011 01:27PM
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colleen the convivial curmudgeon
is on page 87 of 200
"We exploded off the starting line and with Ben's help the sled gradually slid off the starting line." I think my brain just broke a little.
— Sep 05, 2011 06:00PM
colleen the convivial curmudgeon
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FYI - Got this free from the author to review.
— Sep 05, 2011 09:55AM
