Status Updates From The Introspective Debate of...

HOW have I not read this before? :O
It's fucking brilliant.
(hey GR, why don't you rec stories like this to me, instead of your usual crap)

8/22. i know where this is going. bad brody do NOT flirt with mia!

6/22. hehehe that was adorable. Brody u keep the gayness coming :)

2 0f 22. I'm a bit confused about these characters. it might clear up in the upcoming chapters

Like Lori K. said, the writing makes it a bit difficult to know who's talking, but so far, I enjoy it.

"He was covered in traces of it all, fingerprints of feeling ardently pressed upon his being." What a wonderful surprise this story has turned out to be! Thank you, Lauraadriana, for the rec.

Brody, stop your (unintentional?) flirting with Mia, goddamnit!

I'm really liking the potential of this, but I don't get who's talking to who and what's happening half of the time. The paragraphs are separated where they shouldn't be (mid monologue) and attached when there's a jump from one scene to another. It takes me out of an otherwise good story.

Brody was something of an accessory; people invited him, he came, and that was the extent of his interaction. Kehkehkeh. I love this already! :)

People, help me out here: hoe old is somebody in the 9th grade supposed to be?

I'm 100% sure that I love Linden and Brody!!